Today we made a graph on everyone in our classes birthdays. I had three fails, on my first draft I stuffed up on colouring in and the neatness of my writing. So I created a second draft which was neater but I still had to colour it in better and colour it in with coloured pencils. On my third try I Coloured it in with pencil, but I still could of improved on it. So then I had a fourth go at it and wrote neatly and coloured it in perfectly. Have a look at the pictures of my attempts.
